Apprentice of Magic: Diamonds and Toads

The fairy tale Diamonds and Toads is pretty well known... or at least the very, very basic plot points are. But how well do you know the full original story?

As I mentioned on my previous post, my book, Apprentice of Magic, is an Epic Fantasy story (not a fairy tale retelling) but since Enchantress Angelique has already had to deal with so many fairy tales in the Timeless Fairy Tales series I knew I had to include a few fairy tales and Diamonds and Toads is one of those

Which is why today Diamonds and Toads will be the lucky recipient of my sarcastic summary of a fairy tale!

Most people are familiar with the Charles Perrault version–and if that name sounds familiar it’s because he also recorded Puss in Boots and Cinderella.

It goes a little something like this:

Once upon a time there was a really cross/mean widow who had two daughters. The eldest was equally as cross/mean as the mother, but the youngest, beautiful daughter took after her deceased father, who was sweet tempered.

Anywho, the mother favored the shrewish daughter because she was similar to her, and as a result the youngest daughter got stuck with most of the chores, one of them being she had to draw water from a fountain twice a day.

One day an old woman approached the younger daughter when she was at at the fountain, and asked her for a drink. The daughter obligingly used her pitcher to give the woman a drink, and SURPRISE (or not because this is a fairy tale) the old woman was actually a fairy. This fairy gives the daughter the “gift” of every time she spoke, a flower or jewel would fall from her lips.

The girl returns home where her mother scolds her for dawdling but, lo and behold, when the youngest daughter apologizes jewels fall from her lips. The cross widow is astonished and orders her daughter to tell her what happened. Once the entire tale is told, the widow bids her older, shrewish daughter to go to the fountain as well and to act kindly.

The shrewish daughter protests, but the mother kicks her out anyway. The elder daughter reluctantly goes to the well where she finds…a beautiful princess. The princess was really the fairy in disguise #surprisednotsurprised who asks the daughter to give her water.

The shrewish daughter insults the princess/fairy and implies the princess/fairy is a brat, though she does tell her she can use the pitcher if she likes. (Though it seems that she does not offer to draw the water for her.)

In response, the fairy calmly bestows a gift upon the eldest daughter: that every time she speaks a toad or snake will drop from her lips.

The eldest rushes home and tattles to her mother (while dropping a toad and viper from her mouth.) The mother decides this is the youngest daughter’s fault (because…reasons) and banishes her from the house.

A king finds the youngest daughter, crying, and bids her to tell him what’s wrong. She explains–dropping jewels the whole time–and miraculously the King’s son, who happens to be with him, falls in love with her jewels–I MEAN HER! He totally fell in love with her! In the span of a single conversation. Yep.

Since the girl could drop jewels with a word, they decided it didn’t matter that she’s a peasant, and she’s taken off to the palace where she weds her prince. The shrewish older daughter, however, continues to act so spiteful the window banishes her from the house as well, and eventually she starves and dies.

And…er…Happily Ever After??

So I decided to mix up this story a bit in Apprentice of Magic. I knew I wanted to make the oldest daughter good, because as a kid I never really understood why it was such a bad thing that she spoke toads and snakes. (I made a toad farm every summer as a kid, and I was fascinated with amphibians and reptiles in general.)

Moreover, I knew as a law-abiding adult who pays taxes, that miraculously producing bucketfuls of gems would also be a gigantic pain because of the logistics of selling them, and being taxed for them. (Not to mention the mysterious ability would likely be questioned by officials, who would muck up the girl’s daily life. And does anyone really think the prince fell in love with the youngest daughter because he heard how she was kind to a fairy one time??)

So instead, the tale worked perfectly into Apprentice of Magic as a teaching moment–not for the girls, but Angelique.

In fairy tales, enchantresses, fairies, and the like usually run around, tossing out curses and granting boons without actually talking to their victims. Frankly, that’s a horrible way to grant magical gifts. So I wanted Angelique to learn discernment. And thus, my plan for Diamonds and Toads was born.

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Apprentice of Magic: The Fairy Tales

For those of you who are new to my work, the Fairy Tale Enchantress series–which begins with Apprentice of Magic–is the culmination of my Timeless Fairy Tale series, which basically asks “what if all fairy tales happened in the same 5-10 year period and were interconnected?” Angelique is the enchantress that ties every fairy tale together, and so through out the series you’ll see her trot through many familiar fables and tales.

Most of this fun starts after Evariste is captured, but I wanted this to be a theme in Angelique’s life, so I threw some well known stories/fables in Apprentice of Magic as well!

The big ones were:

1. The Boy Who Cried Wolf

2. Pinocchio

3. The Emperor’s New Clothes

4. Goldilocks

5. Diamonds and Toads

You also get to see the start of Sleeping Beauty and Rumpelstiltskin–and even a hint of Beauty and the Beast if you really squint–but the big two stories you see play out in the book are The Boy Who Cried Wolf and Diamonds and Toads. (I did actually write Angelique’s adventure with The Emperor’s New Clothes as a bonus story/chapter, so if you haven’t seen it, you can check it out here: The Dukes Clothes)

I picked all of the above tales because they struck me as being on the sillier side–or rather they showed the potential for humor. (We’re talking about you, Wybert.) But in order to let that play out, I had to twist them a bit.

I think just about everyone has heard of the Boy Who Cried Wolf, but just in case you haven’t, here is a short summary: A bratty shepherd gets bored with his job and finds great joy in shouting falsely about wolves attacking the sheep so the villagers come rampaging to an unneeded rescue. Because no one bothers to punish the boy (because why would you, I mean, he only disrupted an entire village for a joke) he does it again and gets the same amusing results. Eventually the villagers no longer trust him so when a wolf does emerge from the woods and the morally-questionable shepherd shouts for help, no one comes. As a result, the wolf slaughters multiple sheep.

Now I’m all for showing the consequences of actions, but when I read this story it always struck me as rather unfair that its the sheep who pay for the brat’s actions. (I mean, we can assume the shepherd was punished by the owner of the sheep, but the story never tells us this.)

So when I decided I wanted Angelique to teach this kid a lesson, I knew I wanted her to do it in a way that would directly punish the shepherd, not his animals. Additionally, I needed her to do it in a way that would provide practice for her as new apprentice.

And that launched my idea of creating illusion wolves to scare the lies out of dear little Wybert. 😉 (It also lead to my friends deciding perhaps it would be better if they never asked me to babysit their children.)

On the other end of the spectrum, you have Diamonds and Toads, which will be the discussion of my next post!

Apprentice of Magic – Angelique’s Book 1 is here!

Hello Champions!

It’s here! I’ve been waiting years to tell Angelique’s story and the first book. Apprentice of Magic, is finally, almost here! It’s up for pre-order now but it will drop February 13th!

Angelique is actually what inspired me to originally write the Timeless Fairy Tale series. I thought it would be interesting if the seemingly different magic user/fairy godmother/enchantress from many different fairy tales was all the same person. This is why even though the Timeless Fairy Tale books are mostly stand alone, Angelique and the thread of her journey can be found in all of them.

Now it’s time for Angelique to have her own series!

This new series will eventually tie up all the continent wide plot points left from the Timeless Fairy Tales series, but this book covers Angelique’s adventure prior to you meeting her in Beauty and the Beast.

If you’ve been wondering why Angelique hates her magic and how she got started on the search for her master, Evariste, this is the book you need to read!

Pre-order it now: Amazon.com | All other Amazon Stores

Now lets look at that gorgeous cover in detail…

There she is! This is actually the first photo-based cover Myrrhlynn didn’t make for me, but she still helped me figure out what important design elements we needed to include. I hope you guys like it!

And as usual, as my big thank you I’ll be running my review special! There’s only one short this time–because it’s actually a quite long extra/bonus scene–but I’ll post more information about it once Apprentice of Magic launches!