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  • May 28, 2014
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Today I only have good news. First of all, I finished the first draft of Cinderella, and I’ve already dove into the editing process. I’m hoping to hand Cinderella off to my Editor (yes, she deserves the capitalization for what I put her through) sometime next week. Typically this means the release date is about 3-4 weeks away, so I’m hoping for a late June release date.

Secondly, the submissions for the NAME GAME are too fabulous, so I’m changing the rewards. The three Grand Prize Winners will still have their suggested names used in the sequel, but in addition to their real names appearing in the “About the Author” section of the book, I will also send each Grand Prize Winner a free e-copy (if that is a word??) of the sequel when the book is released. (I will use Amazon to make this transaction, so you will need a table or a Kindle app.)

In a second twist I am adding Honorable Mentions to the winning circle. Submitters who are Honorable Mentions will also be listed in My Life at the MBRC’s Sequel. (Sorry, I’m still working on a title that isn’t a major spoiler.) Submissions for the NAME GAME are open for another 3ish days. May 31st is the last day I’m accepting submissions, so get your names to me post-haste!

With that news, I’m going to get back to editing. Thank you for reading, Champions. Have a Wonderful Wednesday!

 

Updated: Mar 19, 2025

While doing research for my retelling of the Wild Swans I spent a lot of time reading the various “Brothers Turned Into Birds & Sister Rescues Them” tales. (There are A LOT. You would think Disney would have tapped this market by now based on all the choices, but alas, their time has not yet come.)


I found two general views that take a deeper look at what the story is about.


The first view says that stories like the Wild Swans are about sisters longing for their brothers to return from war.


In some regions of the world–and in certain eras–it was occasionally practiced that a daughter would be her father’s heir. This was done because the sons were conscripted as soldiers, or willingly left as mercenaries. Their survival rate was not the best, and it was never guaranteed that the sons would decide to come back home even if they lived. As such, it was safer for the father to pass off his business/whatever to his daughter.


Sounds pretty cool, right? Not quite.


The downside is that the daughter was the heir, but as a result her father cared a great deal about whom she married. He exerted much more control over her life, in particularly in the realm of her marriage.


Keeping that in mind, some say the bird-brother tales represent the longing sisters have for their brothers to come home and become the heirs so they are freed from marital responsibility. The only thing that keeps this analysis from being commonly believed is that no one is certain if all the bird-brother stories were collected in regions and during times that this method was practiced.


The second, more widely believed school of thought is that the Wild Swans and the Six Swans (as well as their numerous incarnates) are about family love and sacrifice.


There is a remarkable lack of jealousy among the siblings (and jealousy is something fairy tales commonly use, particularly between family members) and, in fact, the heroine’s relationship with her brothers is the only relationship that is never compromised. Her husband nearly lets her be torched and allows people to accuse her of witchcraft. (He defends her once or twice, but in the end he lets it happen.) The people in her husband’s kingdom think she’s weird and don’t try to befriend her, and her Father marries the witch that turns her brothers into swans. The heroine’s brothers are the only characters who are consistently on her side. They save her from being burned at the stake, and they defend her after they are human and can speak again.


Secondly, the heroine puts saving her brothers before everything. Talking to her husband, clearing her name, saving herself, and in some stories she even has kids (kids–more than one!) all take a back seat to freeing her brothers. Some critics use these facts to say the story is supposed to illustrate how important it is for families (or at least siblings) to stick together and help each other out in difficult times.


Another thing I found interesting is that the Bird-Brother type stories are one of the few kinds of fairy tales where the heroine actually does something.


Not to hate on Cinderella or Snow White, but the Wild Swan heroine has no help. She performs a difficult task on her own to free her brothers. It had nothing to do with romantic love and everything to do with family ties. This fact really played into my version of the story, as you can see the strong ties between Elise and her foster-brothers. It was also why I was unwilling to tie Elise to Prince Toril. Elise is one of the few–if not the only–females who saves someone, she didn’t deserve to be stuck with a husband that nearly allows her to be killed.


I find it interesting to research what fairy tales reveal about our history and culture. I hope you enjoyed this little glimpse into my research!


If this has tempted you to read my adaptation of The Wild Swans here are the links for you:

 
  • May 5, 2014
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Updated: Mar 19, 2025

In a previous blog post I took a look at the original fairy tales I based The Wild Swans on, so today I want to talk about the major ways I departed from the traditional stories.


Here is the list:

  1. Brida: Brida’s presence wasn’t encroaching, but the mere fact she was there made a big difference. She provided companionship, a voice, and protection for Elise. It is unlikely that Elise, mute and untrained for combat, would have been able to thrive without Brida. I wanted to bring a touch of reality to the fairy tale, so I knew I either had to get Elise some help, or allow her to get attacked. Being that Elise had to face Clotildethe Verglas King, and break the curse, I decided she had been put through enough and brought Brida into the story.


  2. Kicking Clotilde Out: The original fairy tales leave the heroine and her brothers happily in the kingdom of her husband. That didn’t sit right with me. Why would such a kick-butt heroine free her brothers, but abandon her country to a witch’s clutches? (Furthermore, why would her brothers do that?) Since the day I started plotting out The Wild Swans I knew I wanted to have a big confrontation between Elise and Clotilde. I gave Elise her magic-canceling-abilities because I decided it was important that she be the one to confront Clotilde.


  3. No Romance For the Foreign Prince: The original fairy tales have the heroine fall in love with the prince/king who drags her from the pond to his Kingdom. This didn’t appeal to me. First off, how well could he know her? She was never able to talk or voice her opinion–and it is unlikely that he would have listened to her even if he did. The fairy tales specifically state that the man takes her back without giving her an option. Plus it is made unfailingly obvious that the prince/king loves her for her great beauty. I was nice to Toril and wrote him as a character that admired Elise’s sacrifice and wished for someone who would do such a thing for him, instead of making him merely shallow.


  4. Falk and Rune: in a continuation of number 3, I made Elise’s love interests her foster-brothers. Why? Because they actually did things for her (both in the original fairy tales and in my version) and strove to keep her safe. As far as I’m concerned, they deserved her more than the guy who ignores her wishes and admires only her beauty.


  5. Gerhart Keeps his Arms: The final departure from the original fairy tale is that Gerhart, the youngest brother, turns completely human instead of having one arm remain a swan wing. I debated about this for a long time before I decided against it. My adaptation is about love conquering hate, and it seemed unfair that for all of Elise’s love Gerhart would still have a bit of the curse on him.


As a final bit of side info, in the original story it is a fairy queen appears before the heroine and explains to her how she can break her brothers’ curse. I replaced her with Enchantress-in-Training Angelique because, well, Angelique has a way of popping up everywhere…for a reason.



 

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