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Updated: Mar 19, 2025

While not having it's own Disney Princess adaptation the fairy tale of The Twelve Dancing Princesses is still well known in pop culture. But how well do you know the original story?


In this blog post I will be sarcastically summarizing the German version of this fairy tale and sharing into I picked up when researching my own retelling of this story, The Twelve Dancing Princesses.


The original story of the Twelve Dancing Princesses is tough to pin down, mostly because there’s so many variants. There’s the most well known version–the Brothers Grimm version which was published in 1812–however, there are also French, Russian, Romanian, Hungarian, Portuguese, Slovakian, Scottish, and Icelandic versions as well. Each story is a little different, but they typically share one of two story structures, which are best showcased in the German version and the French version.


In this blog post I'm reviewing the German version–which is perhaps the more traditional version and follows the adventure of a soldier. For my sarcastic summary of the French version you can read this other blog post.

And now, let's dive into the German version of The Twelve Dancing Princesses...


The king of his country has twelve beautiful daughters who, despite sleeping in a locked room, wear their dancing shoes to pieces every night. The king promises that if a man is able to uncover the mystery of the princesses and their worn shoes within three days and three nights, he will be given the kingdom and he will be allowed the marry the princess of his choice. (Seems like a pretty big reward for a mystery that pertains to used shoes...) However, anyone who tries yet fails to uncover the secret within that three day time frame will be put to death. (There’s no reason given for this death threat. I bet this king is a relative of the king from Rumpelstiltskin!)


This unpromising cycle has continued on for some time, until our hero–the retired soldier–asks for a chance. The king gives his permission, and right before it’s time for the soldier to spend his first night with the princesses, he meets an old woman who gives him an invisibility cloak and tells him not to eat or drink anything the princesses give him and to pretend to sleep.


The soldier follows that advice, and as a result is able to sneak out after the princesses when they leave their room through a trap door. (The soldier follows so closely behind them that he treds on the dress of the youngest princess–who cries out in surprise.) The princesses lead the way through three groves of trees (One grove is made of silver trees, one of gold, and the last of diamonds.) and the soldier takes a twig from each tree.


They then come to a beautiful lake where twelve boats and twelve princes wait to ferry the princesses across. The soldier hops on the boat of the youngest princess, who lectures her prince for being slower than anyone else due to the extra (and unknown) weight the soldier provides. (I might add that while it’s noted the princesses are beautiful, they certainly don’t get personality points.)


In addition to the French and German version, there is also the little known historical Mattel version. (I kid, but I have been told by many parents it’s not half bad!)


Across the water is a castle, where the princesses dance the night away before hurrying back to their home.


The soldier follows the princesses a second and third time, but on the third night he manages to steal a golden cup. The next day he presents the cup and the tree branches to the king as he explains what the princesses do every night. Faced with this absolute proof, the princesses confess that he is correct. The soldier then picks the oldest princess as his bride, and that’s it.


A few things about this story really gets me, and it’s why I was so determined NOT to write a story about the princesses themselves. 1) The princesses are brats. They aren’t under any kind of enchantment, spell, curse, NOTHING. They willingly go dancing every night and refuse to tell their father what they’re doing for reasons never explained. 2) The princesses have been drugging those who tried to uncover their mystery–which is bad enough, but by doing so they willingly participated in their father’s madness and sent men to death because they wanted to dance. Nice girls, these princesses are NOT! 3) If the king is related to the blood thirsty king of Rumpelstiltskin–who threatened a girl with death or marriage–then the soldier is certainly related to the miller’s daughter of Rumpelstiltskin. Why on earth would he want to marry a girl who is at worst capable of murder and at best a compulsive liar??


The second most popular variant of the Twelve Dancing Princess story is fairly similar, but instead of a soldier the hero is a gardener’s boy. (As I mentioned at the beginning, the most well known of this particular strain/type is the French version) which I discuss in this blog post.


If you want to read some of the many variants I mentioned at the start of this post, I highly recommend Twelve Dancing Princesses Tales From Around the Worldby Heidi Anne Heiner. (The ebook is in Kindle Unlimited!)


And if you're now interested in reading my adaptation of this popular fairy tale here are the links:

 

Hello Champions, we’ve got some fun stuff to cover today! First of all, The Twelve Dancing Princesses is available on Pre-order starting today! (Click HERE for the link.) The book launches 1/19–that’s this Friday–so it’s only a few days away.


Next up, Red Rope of Fate is free today through January 20th! Red Rope of Fate is a stand alone epic fantasy-romance novel about a female elf named Tari and her unusual relationship with the human Captain Arion. The story is filled with romance, political intrigue, and–of course–some kick-butt fights! If you like the Timeless Fairy Tales series I highly recommend you give the book a try–and please spread the words to any friends or family who might be interested!


As I say with every book release, reviews are really important for authors. They give opportunities for advertising as some places have a review requirement, and they also provide useful feedback for me and for possible/interested readers. So as a thank you for reviewing!  I love and appreciate reviews wherever you can leave them including Amazon.com, the UK Amazon site, the Australian Amazon site, and Goodreads! And please leave honest reviews!


Here’s the short stories coming as part of this book launch:

  1. Prequel short story: Of Noble Heart: Unlocked

  2. Short Story: A Gallant Celebration: Unlocked

  3. Short Story: A Grim Reveal: Unlocked


Important: A Grim Reveal is actually a Timeless Fairy Tale short that will eventually be added to Angelique’s trilogy–which will come out in 2019. I’m releasing it because it presents some vital information I wanted you guys to get before we continue any farther in the story.


That’s all for today, Champions! I hope you enjoy Red Rope of Fate if you pick up a free copy, and I can’t wait for you all to get your hands on The Twelve Dancing Princesses! In the meantime, have a lovely week!

 
  • Jan 2, 2018
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Welcome to 2018, Champions! I hope 2017 ended nicely for you. Personally, I’m in the middle of a cleaning spree–I just deep cleaned my bathroom last night, and I have seen and smelled things no person should…


We have A LOT of free books and fun things happening this January, Enthroned is first up and will be free from 1/4 through 1/8. There’s a handful of others that I will make a specific post about in the future, but today we’re doing some basic housekeeping!


For starters, the Frog Princess freebies have been moved to the “Extras” page under the For Champions tab. (Pro tip: if you can’t find a freebie any more, it will for certain be found in the extras page. Sometimes I have to change links, and I don’t bother to update the old blog post links, just the extras page.


Speaking of which, the amazing Champion Chloe found a long lost Magical Beings Rehabilitation Center short, Taking Care of Business! You can click on the title for a link, but it has also been relocated to the freebies section as well. A big thank you to Chloe, who went over some of my most ancient blog posts to find it!


In other awesome-champion news, I have some fanart to share!

This lovely drawing was done by a Champion who wishes to be known as “Rakel-wanna-be!”


There’s a lot I love about this image–Elise herself, her uniform, her desk–but what really blows me away is the detail. That’s the Arcainian flag you see tucked behind the desk, and Elise’s much hated gold flute by her feet. (I laughed for several minutes when I saw that flute!) But the most perfect of all are the two love letters on the ground–one is from Falk and the other form Rune. Way to go, “Rakel-wanna-be”! You did an amazing job, and I’m so honored you chose to draw Elise!


That’s it for today! I’ll be back soon with the list of Free Books for January, and the cover reveal for Twelve Dancing Princesses. Until then, enjoy the new year, Champions.

 

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